Outlining and strawberries

January 10, 2007 at 1:12 am — Fiction, Planning


Terry Brooks advises novelists to write an outline before writing a novel. He does acknowledge that many successful writers write without outlines. Then he says:

But if you check what most writers who don’t outline have to say about their work habits, you will discover that they end up doing several drafts of a book and any number of rewrites afterwards.I don’t. I do one draft, one rewrite, and I’m done.

By outlining, you are doing the hard work in the beginning–the thinking, the organizing, the weighing and considering, and the making of choices. By doing it early, you can save yourself a lot of time and effort at the end. [Sometimes the Magic Works, p 95]

I don’t think Brooks’s advice fits for me.

I wrote my first novel in November as a NaNoWriMo project. In the month before, in October, I prepared by writing a partial outline. I sketched out 20 or so scenes. Most of these were action scenes, in which a viewpoint character tries to accomplish some goal, bumps into a conflict or obstacle, and (usually) ends up worse off at the end of the scene. For those scenes, I noted the goal, the conflict, and the outcome.

A handful of scenes were reaction scenes, in which the viewpoint character reacts to a setback, ponders the available options (usually all bad), and makes a decision about what to do next. For each reaction scene I noted the reactions, the options, and the decision.

Those 20 scenes seemed like a great beginning for the novel–they left the main character on the edge of his sanity. But I didn’t know what would happen next. I put in a lot of thought, but couldn’t think of anything that satisfied me. I had a vague idea or two about the ending, but I didn’t know what would happen in the middle of the story. I ended October with a detailed outline for the beginning, an idea or two about the ending, and no clue about the middle.

On November 1st I began writing the scenes I had sketched in the outline. On most days the words flowed well. Other days the words came slowly. But they always came.

Somewhere around the 14th, I ran out of outline. But I kept writing, and the ideas kept coming. On most days the words flowed well. Other days the words came slowly. But they always came.

By the end of November, I had written about 18,000 words according to the outline, and another 34,000 words without an outline. Mostly my process stayed the same, outline or not. And the quality of my writing stayed the same. And my hopes and worries about my writing stayed the same.

So it isn’t clear to me that the outline helped, or that it saved me any time.

My first draft, at 52,000 words, is just barely a novel. It’s certainly not a good novel. It is sketchy. It’s full of holes. The characters do a few things with little motivation. In a few places, I made characters do downright stupid things in service to the ending I had cooked up ahead of time. I have a lot of work to do to flesh out the story and make it satisfying. In a sense, my first draft is not much more than a detailed outline.

It’s possible that this first draft gave me no better understanding of the plot–the main events of the story–than I would have gotten from completing the outline. Even if that’s true, I’d still prefer the writing, for two reasons. First, as much as I enjoyed outlining, I enjoyed the writing far more. That counts for a lot.

Even more important is this: As I was outlining–thinking about the story–I had a general sense of who the main characters were. But I didn’t have an experience of the characters no matter how much I thought about them. It was only by writing them into trouble, and writing their reactions to the trouble, that I could decide who I wanted them to be.

As I outlined, I thought about the plot and the characters. As I wrote, I experienced the the characters. Experiencing was better than thinking, in the same way that eating a strawberry is better than thinking about eating a strawberry.

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Comment by anonymous — January 13, 2007 at 4:27 am

Hi Dale–this is from Tracie (new person in WordForge.) I too have struggled with the concept of outlining. When I first read that quote by Brooks some time ago, I was frustrated by and envious of him. I’ve written two (or three, depending on your definition) novels and the best thing about writing them is being up at 2:30am, buzzing away at the keyboard and learning the story as you write it. I love it when I’m cruising along, writing a character’s story and I think, “Oh my God, I can’t believe he’s doing that,” or crying over a character’s untimely death that I didn’t know about until she died. Having said all that, I do make a “map” where I write down two or three pages worth of scenes that come to me, but I often veer far enough from what I wrote, that I’ve forgotten it by the “end” of the writing. So far, the best thing for me has been just plugging through the story–and you’re right, when you’re finished, it’s like a really detailed outline (a 50,000 word outline.) It’s nice to hear about somebody else’s experience with this. Thanks for sharing.

Comment by jenfullmoon — January 13, 2007 at 4:42 am

I think the point of an outline is that you don’t stall out on the writing. You know what you’re supposed to be doing. Obviously, no outline has screwed me this year!

Comment by Dale Emery — January 14, 2007 at 5:58 pm

Right, you don’t stall on the writing. And as Terry Brooks says, it frees you to focus on things other than the plot.

Just to be clear, I’m not advising anyone to skip outlining. Lots of folks find it very helpful. In fact, I found it helpful in some ways in November. Knowing the general movement of each scene freed me to think about smaller bits — “beats.” That was helpful. And I might benefit even more from outlining next time I do it.

My one experience with outlining was mixed. More about that later.

Comment by Dwayne Phillips — January 23, 2008 at 5:58 am

I outline when I write non-fiction, such as engineering management books. I have writing short story fiction this year. I haven’t been outlining for that. Somehow I consider the short stories “practice” and not “for real” or something like that. I let the words flow.

For bigger projects, like the aforementioned books, I feel a need to know where I am going and where I have been.

Comment by Michael Kelly — June 20, 2008 at 12:58 pm

What’s interesting to me about your post, and Terry Brooks’ book as well, is that they both make me think of exploratory testing. As you say, “Experiencing was better than thinking, in the same way that eating a strawberry is better than thinking about eating a strawberry.”

In my writing, I find that outlines help me when I’m writing technical articles, but they hinder me when I’m writing fiction. I’m not sure why. I think it might be word count. If I have 3,000 words, outlines help me figure out what’s in scope and out of scope. If I have as much space as I want, I find they constrain me to much and I ignore them. Now I don’t bother making them for fiction.

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